Shadow’s Depths Page 12


Shadow’s Depths page 12 of the webcomic Dystopia moves deeper into Modrena’s role as a Link as Bradson and Frazier begin to understand what contact with her may reveal.

At the upper left, Frazier and Bradson stand facing one another against a black background. Frazier wears his cap and is holstering his handgun at his side, while Bradson wearing his helmet and communications gear looks intently.

In the second panel, Modrena faces forward between the two soldiers. Her pale blue face is calm, with large dark eyes and long tendrils floating outward around her head. Bradson and Frazier are seen from behind on either side of her as contact is initiated. Jasper’s explanation continues in a pale green, rough-edged dialogue box: “The essence of a Link is that they’re a focus for our method of communication in the city. We don’t do electronics. We operate on a much more subtle plane, courtesy of our leader.”

The next panel moves into a close-up of Modrena. Frazier and Bradson's hands rise on either side of her face, fingers moving carefully among the floating tendrils around her temples. Her expression remains calm and focused. Jasper explains that they are everywhere in the city and therefore see many things, and that Modrena will show the soldiers some of what she is able to translate to someone who “isn’t us.”

In panel four, Modrena is shown in profile. The soldier's hands make closer contact as the tendrils begin to wrap themselves around the extended hands. Jasper says the real question is one the soldiers must answer for themselves: “Is this a truth that speaks to me about life in the city?”

The fifth panel is a close-up of Frazier. His face is serious and uncertain beneath his cap, his eyes fixed forward. A dialogue box asks, “Is it terrifying?”

The final panel is a close-up of Bradson beneath his helmet and headset. His bright blue eyes stare forward, his expression attentive rather than fearful. Jasper’s words continue: “Or is it intriguing? Are you willing to see the depths, as well as the heights?” The dystopia.ink URL appears along the bottom.
 

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Chapter 04: Shadow’s Depths – Page 12

The voice is Jasper’s, but the page is Modrena’s

In the previous drop, Frazier reluctantly agreed to find out what contact with a Link actually entails. This time around in Dystopia: Shadow’s Depths, the explanation begins to give way to the experience. Jasper continues doing the talking, but visually the page shifts toward Modrena. She moves from the center of the group composition into increasingly tighter views, while her calm expression and moving tendrils suggest that she understands exactly what is about to happen, even if Bradson and Frazier do not.

Over on the Patreon, we look deeper into that transition and reference an earlier discussion about giving Jasper his own visual voice. The scene belongs to Modrena, but the voice guiding us through the experience still belongs to Jasper.

Readers interested in extended creator commentary, lettering, character design, page composition, and the visual storytelling behind Dystopia can find the full article on Patreon.

→ Read ALFA’s essay on Patreon

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